Critique Needed

[MidgetMage55]

With some of the shading in place I can definitely say the facial features (nose and eyes specifically) look off set to our left a tad much. Her eyes also seem to be at different angles and sizes. More so than would be expected for a head turned ever so slightly to one side.

The shading looks nice so far. The textures of the shoulder pads are coming along nicely. Keep up the good work! =)

[Cyn325]

The thing I noticed with the eyes is they are "lopsided?" One eye is noticably (imo) higher than the other. The one pic, the weapons? on her back did look a bit ummm phallic? in nature. Guess I have a dirty mind too, voodoo lol. It does seem to be shaping up tho :-).

[Ferous]

Yeah... the face sort of bugs me but ill see what I can do lol. I tried to fix the right ear as much as I could.. update! lol. Took me about 5 hours for this tiny bit of what I did today.

edit - here is a revised of what I did today... I spent about 8 hours.. lol on it today, total of probably 12-16 hours, I can't say for sure, I didn't keep track. Still not done, but close! lol

[Dawn]

Far better than what I could do.

You kinda overdid the shadow thing here and there though, imho. Like in the face and on her arms. Her body, especially the lower half, looks a bit to ... err, wide, also. *hopes she didn't heard that*

You could get a little more texture in the robe with transparent layers, probably like what you did with the shoulders - just a different (more clothy) texture and a little less.

[Ferous]

Good Idea dawn, I thought of it, though I couldn't find a clothy texture I liked yet, but I will try to do that. But, I'm calling it done, otherwise I might do the cloth texture over the robe. :P

Officially done though! lol



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